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rainydayz 69F
145 posts
4/12/2019 4:10 pm

Some English classes would help this blog be a bit more readable. Your sentence structure is horrid as is your spelling and punctuation.

“The further a society drifts from the truth, the more it will hate those that speak it.”


GavinLS2 69M
1525 posts
4/13/2019 3:10 am

Hi Hal,

I too am an author. I've published two novels and written for community journals in the past. I've also been adept at writing technical scientific papers. I have to say that your observations here are obviously intensely well thought out, contain much detail, and are full of shit. Aside from that last fact I'd say this is a very fine blog entry. And aside from the fact that you are obviously a fool, I'd say you are a very fine writer.

GBU,

Gavin


rainydayz 69F
145 posts
4/13/2019 5:10 am

A plethora of words does not make a successful writer. Neither does failing to follow one's on plot.

“The further a society drifts from the truth, the more it will hate those that speak it.”


Archer62 83F
7052 posts
4/13/2019 8:58 am

I CAN ONLY HOPE THAT THE BOOK HAS BEEN READ BY A GOOD PUBLISHER'S READER-CORRECTOR FOR SPELLING AND SERIOUS GRAMMAR ERRORS. I HAVEN' READ SUCH A BUNCH OF CRAP IN AGES.


butterfly21 74F
205 posts
4/26/2019 3:12 pm

I very rarely respond to blogs, but I have to respond.

Whenever I have seen you in the chat room you act like a child or else you are bullying another male. I have not seen you even so much as try to be civil to any of the ladies in the room.

Several of us in chat have met in person on several occassions and we have gotten to know each other outside of chat. Oh yes that would include males for the site as well as females. We have gone sigh seeing together eaten meals together and yes partied and drank together. All of these activities started in the chat room.

In my opinion the chat room is what chooses to make it whether it be to bully, fight, put someone down or have fun.

Perhaps if you were not bulling someone and truly tried to get to know some people in chat, you might have a different point of view.


wonderious 68F
2024 posts
5/11/2019 3:40 am

So what exactly is this blog about? Whatever it is gets lost in the wordiness, like not being able to see the trees for the forest. I notice when you are in the chat room it seems to be the same, do you think if you repeat the same thing over and over it has to be fact. Hmm don't think I would read any publication you might have, much too wordy without any real content.