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HEY YOU. HOW ABOUT HELPING ME FINISH THIS HALF WAY COMPLETED POEM Below is one of my many unfinished works of verse. If you can come up with some other examples of what greatness to you is. Please just post them in the comment sections below. Perhaps collectively you might just gain Partial Copyrights in a future published work you can tell your grandkids or for that matter, everyone else about.. Yep a real live legacy of sorts for bragging rights. Perhaps a historical romantic moment in time?. a movie or a song we all remember? a speech?, an historical day? perhaps a teacher that changed your life, your wedding day, the birth of your . It doesn't have to be famous, it can be a simple time you will always remember and not mentioned in your limited profile on here. All it takes is perhaps ten minutes to create two lines that both rhyme at the very end. Come on now, your cleaver and creative and here's your chance to surprise yourself and delight others like you. So please join me. the subject lines being. what greatness is to you! GREATNESS TO ME IS Michelangelo's spent upon his back Einstein revealing his 1905 Physics Facts Dr. Kings 1963 Dream Speech so all Inspiring Apollo Elevens 1969 launch pad rockets firing Our July 4, 1776 Independence Day Date Elvis singing in concert from our Fiftieth State The final ending chapters to end World War Two JFK'S inaugural speech about Ask What You Can Do Muhammad Ali during his most productive years Or Lou Gehrig's Farewell speech of a million tears The British rock Invasion from across the sea Steve Jobs visions in creating new technologies ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________| ______________________________________________________________________| ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 
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Sometimes its the little things that become important in our lives.
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Well remembered is key here. Very meaningful that your proud to carry within you mind and heart.
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An example might be: Greatness was hearing my first newborns very first cries My Pains changed to exuberance bringing me teary eyes.
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What comes to my mind is bringing a sailboat about in a storm.........Kyaking through rapids and whirlpools, climbing steep rock walls, getting a dozen 3-year olds to sleep at the same time..LOL.......There are many feats of greatness performed every day by many people......Greatness includes great mercy and great generosity......great patience, great exhuberance, great cheese......Always there is GRATE CHEESE........
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Greatness is in the warmth of hearts The warmth you have, and the warmth someone else imparts
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What comes to my mind is bringing a sailboat about in a storm.........Kyaking through rapids and whirlpools, climbing steep rock walls, getting a dozen 3-year olds to sleep at the same time..LOL.......There are many feats of greatness performed every day by many people......Greatness includes great mercy and great generosity......great patience, great exhuberance, great cheese......Always there is GRATE CHEESE........ ONE HELL OF A GREAT LIFE TO DATE!
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Greatness is in the warmth of hearts The warmth you have, and the warmth someone else imparts So many different meanings delivered in your three line stanza. thus we have Muhammad Ali during his most productive years Or Lou Gherigs Farewell speech of a millon tears The British rock Invasion from across the sea Steve Jobs visions in creating new technologies Greatness is in the warmth of our hearts The warmth we have and the warmth someone else imparts Manning the tiller in an angry sea Getting a dozen kids , just to mind me Giving and forgiving in such unselfish ways Making life SO DAM GREAT THESE DAYS!!!!
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ok folks................if you can't rhyme, simply toss out some subject matter me or others inhere can hone in on and come with some more stanza's!
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Thats so beautiful I have read it six times and feel compelled to do six more. Your traits and views of life so genuine, basic and down to earth. I have written many poems on the things you listed above. Meaningful , genuine and examples of how to find memories to honor and cherish.. I hope you read this post from two days ago to see this comment. one i have i mind describes you to a tee!! Dan
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Dominance. is the "fake news" of the Great "America First" is better NEVER than late Trump, tells US.... of greatness...so smugly but, if you look in the mirror.. it's ALL "Fugly" (thank you sewg)
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