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Love of poetry I have written a lot of poems.. starting about 15 years ago. In a way this site once inspired me.as I began writing when I came here. At first it was just Pen man ship. But the first poem I wrote, for me and about me, gave me a real sense of purpose both in defining my own life, and my view of the life. LUNAR LOVE She thought I hung the moon and all Her eyes... told me so It made me feel ten feet tall That's all love needs to know But expectations paid the devil's due when what was paid, was not enough The toll on love was the revenue that counted the unimportant stuff The moon shined over a sleeping mountain Until changing eyes, said more than lips And expectations she began to count on Created a lunar eclipse |
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It may silly to you..but it told my story. How love can go.. when it's not meant to go anywhere, but a moment in time
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Not silly at all ~~~~~ For me, the satisfaction/joy comes from my writings, not from what others may think of what I have written.  Keep on doing what you're doing!!
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Poetry is an elusive art!
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Very nice poem, jiminy, thanks for sharing.
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Very good ! Not silly at all. I like this poem ! 
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