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jiminycricket1 74M
5508 posts
4/27/2022 2:15 pm
My Muse


My Muse

On the sandy beaches of my solitude
Skies of gray, and stillness of air
I search the shore, in pensive mood
To re-discover a mermaid there.

She once came to me on worded wings
That lit upon my soul.
Revealing things that could have been
Things to make me whole.

She took me to a distant shore
A place of "should have been"
Her magic kept me mesmerized
With a dream she'd come again

She departed without a fond adieu
Her words painted on my mind
I wonder if she ever knew
She left her art behind.

Now, I walk along the water's edge
All the footprints washed away
Seeking her magic's knowledge
Finding her clues along the way.

A sea of glimmering silver and turquoise
Blonde seaweed that curls and flows
Seashells that make an echoing noise
of the precious moment, magic knows.

My thoughts, my prayers, my devotion
Someday her return to the magic land
Til then, I'll hold her hand across an ocean
Til then, I'll feel her heartbeat in the sand.


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jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
4/27/2022 2:16 pm

I thought I'd repost this..
and maybe start looking again.


Rocketship 80F
18568 posts
4/27/2022 2:44 pm

What a lovely and poignant poem, Jiminy~~


sparkleflit 76F
10271 posts
4/27/2022 2:52 pm

Love this poem....So sincere and unpretentious...and joyful....like the beach itself...


Maudie1 74F
8151 posts
4/27/2022 11:33 pm

Beautiful poem, Jiminy.


lilium6 74F
4498 posts
4/28/2022 1:00 am

Your dreamy poem had me drifting along on Gabrielle Aplin's beautiful "Skylight'' :- )


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
4/28/2022 3:01 am

    Quoting Rocketship:
    What a lovely and poignant poem, Jiminy~~
.. Thank you all for responding....

I like it when a poem changes meaning for me..

When i wrote this it was about love and loss, and a promise not to forget. Hopeful but distant

I re-posted this....because it became a reminder ...."to stop and smell the roses"
Nothing is ever lost that can be found.


StarCandy1 69F
1797 posts
4/28/2022 6:03 am

Very beautiful poem jim ! One that U can visualize while reading <3