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jiminycricket1 74M
5508 posts
3/18/2022 3:29 pm
Dreams


I dreampt of a life that wasn't to be
The captain of my ship, ruler of the sea
Of blue skies and fair winds
Of fame and fortunes

But storms and rough seas
with too few you's and too many me's
Closed too many ports and sunk too many ships
For what I dreampt ought to be

Although it's too late.. It's not done
If only, I never fail to forget
Life is not about dreams unfullfilled
It's about the dreams
I haven't dreampt yet.


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
3/18/2022 3:31 pm


sparkleflit 76F
10271 posts
3/18/2022 4:31 pm

I love the way you said that....I'm just realizing that I don't need the possibility of my dreams coming true in order to dream...Letting go of ambition.


Rocketship 80F
18568 posts
3/18/2022 5:43 pm

Your last stanza is the kind that gives us all hope.

Thank you for sharing your poem.


Darter50516 66M
3857 posts
3/18/2022 7:41 pm

I feel like an IOWA Class battleship plying the seas


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
3/19/2022 6:44 am

    Quoting sparkleflit:
    I love the way you said that....I'm just realizing that I don't need the possibility of my dreams coming true in order to dream...Letting go of ambition.
I think acceptance is more important than letting go. I don't think it's possible, in truth, to regret a dream, unless one dreams about regret.

It's hard to do..acceptance.....much easier to let it go...Dreams are messages..neither good or bad..that in many cases should help us understand....the life we don't live helps to define the life we do..

You don't "kill" the messenger

I am still the captain of my ship and ruler of my seas, failure is not an option. Choices are.
The is no divine intervention, good or bad, about the choices we make. Circumstance may dictate the possible choices. But in reality, each choice has already been written in stone..
When you can "accept" the fact in doesn't define what you are..It defines who you are. Good or bad should NEVER enter the picture.. it is what it is.


sparkleflit 76F
10271 posts
3/19/2022 10:06 am

Letting go is part of the process that leads to acceptance...Habits of youth, like ambition need to be weeded out to make way for acceptance. We make many unconscious decisions every day....As we alter our course, we are hindered by those habitual thoughts .....I pull them out and discard them like weeds in my garden...Often, some roots or stray seeds are left behind and they will grow back and it takes a while to recognize them ....Ambition is a rank weed in the garden of my heart. /SIZE]


Maudie1 74F
8151 posts
3/19/2022 10:20 am

Beautiful poem, Jiminy, thanks for sharing it with us.


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
3/19/2022 4:54 pm

people think too much in perfection.. weeds may not be wanted,, butt truth is.. weeds are an integral part of ones garden.. instead of tending one's garden..i would one should "tender" on'e's garden.


TxJW024 81M

3/20/2022 2:08 am

Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is a mystery.
Party On!


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
3/20/2022 6:35 am

    Quoting sparkleflit:
    Letting go is part of the process that leads to acceptance...Habits of youth, like ambition need to be weeded out to make way for acceptance. We make many unconscious decisions every day....As we alter our course, we are hindered by those habitual thoughts .....I pull them out and discard them like weeds in my garden...Often, some roots or stray seeds are left behind and they will grow back and it takes a while to recognize them ....Ambition is a rank weed in the garden of my heart. /SIZE]
People think too much about perfection.. Weeds may not be wanted,, but the truth is.. weeds are an integral part of one's garden.. instead of tending one's garden..i would think one should "tender" one's garden. Tendering the heart is not about pulling out the weeds.. It's about incorporating them.


sparkleflit 76F
10271 posts
3/20/2022 10:36 am

    Quoting jiminycricket1:
    People think too much about perfection.. Weeds may not be wanted,, but the truth is.. weeds are an integral part of one's garden.. instead of tending one's garden..i would think one should "tender" one's garden. Tendering the heart is not about pulling out the weeds.. It's about incorporating them.
You don't seem to understand the meaning of the word "weed", or the purpose of metaphor...LOL...You obviously have never gardened.....A "weed" is a plant that grows where it is not wanted and/or in competition with wanted plants.....There is lots of room outside the garden fence where the wild and invasive plants thrive....Gardening is all about nurturing tenderness,....Tender vegetables and fruit, which become tough and wooden and bitter when competing with weeds......it has nothing to do with "perfection', but with making a slight course-correction...

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lilium6 74F
4498 posts
3/20/2022 3:05 pm

I came across this beautifully expressed saying which I feel isn't too out of place regarding 'Dreams' ~

Bamboo shadows sweep the stairs
but no dust is stirred;
moonlight reaches to the bottom of the pond
but no trace is left in the water.
- Zenrinkushu


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
3/21/2022 4:15 am

    Quoting sparkleflit:
    You don't seem to understand the meaning of the word "weed", or the purpose of metaphor...LOL...You obviously have never gardened.....A "weed" is a plant that grows where it is not wanted and/or in competition with wanted plants.....There is lots of room outside the garden fence where the wild and invasive plants thrive....Gardening is all about nurturing tenderness,....Tender vegetables and fruit, which become tough and wooden and bitter when competing with weeds......it has nothing to do with "perfection', but with making a slight course-correction...

    .
You talk in absolutes.. A weed may be more bad than good.. but it's not all bad...
that would be like the "pot" calling the kettle black.


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
3/21/2022 4:36 am

    Quoting lilium6:
    I came across this beautifully expressed saying which I feel isn't too out of place regarding 'Dreams' ~

    Bamboo shadows sweep the stairs
    but no dust is stirred;
    moonlight reaches to the bottom of the pond
    but no trace is left in the water.
    - Zenrinkushu

What's real and what's not real.. what is remembrance and what is belief?

Everything has a place....and every place has a "thing".

two plus two....can make four......
If you don't know the steps....Your just going 2 have 2 wear a "tutu"

"Oh, how it feels so real
Lying here with no one near
Only you and you can hear me
When I say softly slowly

Hold me closer, tiny dancer
Count the headlights on the highway
Lay me down in sheets of linen
You had a busy day today"