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jiminycricket1 74M
5508 posts
5/9/2020 5:30 am
Mermaids


On the sandy beaches of my solitude
Skies of gray, and stillness of air
I search the shore, in pensive mood
discover my mermaid there.

She came on worded wings
That lit upon my soul.
Revealing things that could be
Things that make whole.

She took a distant shore
A place of "should have been"
Her magic kept mesmerized
With dreams she'd come again

She departed without a fond adieu
Her words painted on my mind
I wonder if she ever knew
She left her art behind.

Now, I walk along the water's edge
All her footprints washed away
Seeking her magic's knowledge
Finding her clues along the way.

A sea of glimmering silver and turquoise
Blonde seaweed that curls and flows
Seashells that make an echoing noise
of the precious moment, magic knows.

My thoughts, my prayers, my devotion
Someday a return the magic land
Til then, I'll hold her hand across an ocean
Til then, I'll feel her heartbeat in the sand.


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jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
5/9/2020 5:31 am

I, Oh so want to believe
In Mermaids of the sea,
In God, In hope and love,
In all that can be

When Life becomes too painful
It ebbs the tide of dreams
And mermaids vanish from the sea
The greater loss, so it seems

The challenge is not asking "why"
you get, what you got
But not having life's pain deny
the challenge of "why not"


Rocketship 80F
18568 posts
5/9/2020 5:45 am

**Exactly~~~

Thank you for sharing this!


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
5/9/2020 6:17 am


LOVE IS NOT AN ISLAND

The mermaid slips back to the sea
Now in hiding, from the sailor in me
But there she'll ponder how love goes
That life is only what she knows

Lost upon the mermaid's island
The sailor seeks the safe highland
and there he'll ponder how love goes
That life is only what he knows

Love, it may come and go
As in life, God has made it so
Each measure of joy, not meaning much
But simply defined through those you touch

For in seeking the highland, or the sea
It matters not, where love can be
If your life can touch another heart
Then your love can leave, but not depart


lilium6 74F
4498 posts
5/9/2020 8:35 pm

Thank you :- ) - I really enjoy your relatable poems, the imagery they evoke. T S Eliot's 'Little Gidding' comes to mind with its strong imagery and thrilling sense of immediacy/timelessness. It is my favourite poem and hope you don't mind the inclusion of the opening verse by way of invitation (if not already familiar with it).

'Midwinter spring is its own season
Sempiternal though sodden towards sundown,
Suspended in time, between pole and tropic.
When the short day is brightest, with frost and fire,
The brief sun flames the ice, on pond and ditches,
In windless cold that is the heart's heat,
Reflecting in a watery mirror
A glare that is blindness in the early afternoon.
And glow more intense than blaze of branch, or brazier,
Stirs the dumb spirit: no wind, but pentecostal fire
In the dark time of the year. Between melting and freezing
The soul's sap quivers. There is no earth smell
Or smell of living thing. This is the spring time
But not in time's covenant. Now the hedgerow
Is blanched for an hour with transitory blossom
Of snow, a bloom more sudden
Than that of summer, neither budding nor fading,
Not in the scheme of generation.
Where is the summer, the unimaginable Zero summer?
'


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
5/10/2020 5:29 am

    Quoting lilium6:
    Thank you :- ) - I really enjoy your relatable poems, the imagery they evoke. T S Eliot's 'Little Gidding' comes to mind with its strong imagery and thrilling sense of immediacy/timelessness. It is my favourite poem and hope you don't mind the inclusion of the opening verse by way of invitation (if not already familiar with it).

    'Midwinter spring is its own season
    Sempiternal though sodden towards sundown,
    Suspended in time, between pole and tropic.
    When the short day is brightest, with frost and fire,
    The brief sun flames the ice, on pond and ditches,
    In windless cold that is the heart's heat,
    Reflecting in a watery mirror
    A glare that is blindness in the early afternoon.
    And glow more intense than blaze of branch, or brazier,
    Stirs the dumb spirit: no wind, but pentecostal fire
    In the dark time of the year. Between melting and freezing
    The soul's sap quivers. There is no earth smell
    Or smell of living thing. This is the spring time
    But not in time's covenant. Now the hedgerow
    Is blanched for an hour with transitory blossom
    Of snow, a bloom more sudden
    Than that of summer, neither budding nor fading,
    Not in the scheme of generation.
    Where is the summer, the unimaginable Zero summer?'
A teaser of self reflection.
A taser for one's hibernation
A peace that "lies" between fire and ice.
That reveals it's own imperfection
A Midwinter Spring that declares....
No truth...but It's absence