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jiminycricket1 74M
5533 posts
5/15/2017 8:35 am
A walk in the sun


I walk in the sun
Until dark cloud appear
over the hills
so I walk the other way

The ground begins to tremor
and birds fly away.
I wonder where they're going
I wonder where they'll stay

The clouds blot out the sun
The ground begins to swell
I wonder where I can run
and wish I could fly away

I search for shelter
beneath a tree
past the river
beyond the sea.

where storms do not rage
and solid ground's below
And will it ever be done
the fear of this day

Or will it be the end
When this day is done
Will it never come again
When I walk in the sun


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
5/15/2017 8:44 am

Dedicated to those who once walked in the sun. Who's anger, hate , and fear, will never allow them to do it again. For them, a walk in the sun, will NEVER be the same.


Rentier1

5/16/2017 5:22 am

I believe that was the title of movie starring Huntz Hall.


bijou624

5/16/2017 6:42 am

Great writing Jiminy. It really makes you think. There's a lot less rhyming and for me it is way better this way.