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jiminycricket1 74M
5533 posts
8/14/2014 6:36 am
She Came Into My Room


Another of my writing on the poet tree.........dedicated to Cariad

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She came into my room
Not knowing I was there
She touched my heart and soul
moved me from there to here

She left the room unchanged
that's what others seem to see
but my furniture's rearranged
In the room inside of me

I'll trip over the chair
the table is now askew
the lamps go on and off
without switches to do

She left her words hanging
painting pictures of magic's night
She added color to the walls
Once seen as black and white

Now the pictures tilt a bit
and try to find their place
Yet I can't seem to remember
Which way they use to face

I try to put it all straight
and forget she ever came
but there's too many reminders
To make it be the same

Maybe she will come again
let her magic fill the air
Get be longings back in order
Set my table and my chair

Until that day comes
I'll pray to recover
There's so much to do
Love's magic to discover

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Abelle2 83F
31246 posts
8/14/2014 6:50 am

VERY nice!


Hawkslayer 88M
13354 posts
8/14/2014 7:02 am

I really enjoyed reading this, jiminy.

Alfie....


It only takes a drop of ink to make a million people think. There are many stories.


looklook 84M
3926 posts
8/14/2014 8:01 am

Thanks for sharing jiminycricket.Wish she is real !!


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
8/14/2014 11:45 am

Thank you all for reading me......

looklook ....... she can be real......

The one thing, one needs to know
To make it real, to make it so......

No closed door can let her in
Looking out the window stays within
So, if you want to make it real
To get touched, you must feel

You needn't search, you needn't find
Just an open heart and an open mind
And no matter what you choose to do
If you can be touched,
She can be real for you


spiritwoman45

8/14/2014 11:48 am

Love it

Spiritwoman ^i^