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jiminycricket1 74M
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6/11/2012 8:27 am
Lunar Love


She thought I hung the moon and all
Her eyes... told me so
It made me feel ten feet tall
That's all love needs to know

The other stuff was but love's prize
frosting that makes the cake stellar
Yet, incomparable to moon in her eyes
Of being seen, better than you are

Then expectations paid the devil's due
when what was paid, was not enough
The toll on love became the revenue
that counted the unimportant stuff

The moon shined over this sleeping mountain
Until changing eyes said more than lips
And expectations she began to count on
Created a lunar eclipse


Some time ago I wrote this, thought it was due for a re-write.

spiritwoman45

6/11/2012 10:18 am

Dianna, the Moon Goddess, would love this. Great expression of feeling.

Spiritwoman ^i^