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jiminycricket1 74M
5533 posts
2/1/2011 10:52 am
Turn out the Lights


I wrote my first poem a few years back after a divorce, It's was wordy and lenghty, After reading it today I decided to rewrite it more concise, yet say the same thing.

You could make my heart smile
With The light in your eyes,
The gifts that you gave
An unexpected surprise

A youthful view of love
flawed, but not seen
Not caring where it's going
Not understanding where it's been

It happened in a moment
Changed our life forever.
You saw, that other's see
Love's an incomplete endeavor

For is it not true,
about what others see
If they're not envious of you,
why would you need me

You stopped saying I love you
Yet I never thought, I was bad
Until the day you expected better of me.
And me was all I had.


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
2/3/2011 8:27 am

ty all

Destiny, smiles and waits, knowing secrets not revealed, that destination have no fates, Yet journeys haven't concealed. Hopefully we'll both keep on truckin.

karen, moved back to Kansas... My life in a blizzard!

Lady N, Thank you for visiting, it's been a while. Hope you GET what you want and GIVE what you can!