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jiminycricket1 74M
5533 posts
11/28/2009 10:17 am
A Day In The Life


In early morn
I wondered what the day would bring
Upon the dawn
I heard the bluebirds sing

In the afternoon
The choice of what my day's to be
None to soon
Come the chances that await for me

In the twilight
The time of "could have been"
And if just might
The early morn come again


Robyn5 83F

11/29/2009 5:42 am

Hi jiminy, I love early morn, lying in bed listening to the dawn chorus at the window. Nice poem, I wonder about the middle part, what the choices are!


jiminycricket1 74M
13732 posts
11/29/2009 8:30 am

robyn,

the begining, when we're young, hopes and dreams
the middle, being in charge, decisions, mistakes
the end, reflecting back, and wishing we had a second chance to do it all again.