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ltw222 75M
5450 posts
10/19/2008 10:55 pm
Autumn


Picture from MoonShadow

Motley colours of the forest top
Ablaze in daylight’s waning glow
As disgruntled leaves begin to drop
Onto cold bare ground way below

Busy squirrels along frost-covered path
Scurry for food as winter looms
Golden leaves in gentle winds waft
Over sad plants with forgotten blooms

Frost-covered branches beseech the sky
For sunshine, just a little longer
Perhaps this is the reason why
At times rises an Indian summer

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
10/20/2008 6:06 am

    Quoting  :

Hi MsEducator,
Thank you. I was just guessing. We have year round summer here but no Indian Summers.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


Maynilabelle 64F

10/20/2008 9:48 am

good guess Lee! thanks for sharing. {{HUGZ}}


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
10/20/2008 7:23 pm

    Quoting  :

Hi shirl,
A rubber estate with frost on the ground? But it sure looks like one now that you have pointed it out.
Oh, durian season is starting and I have just returned from breakfast at Pelita Nasi Kandar. They have curry crab, curry prawn, curry fish head, roti canai, ayam masak merah, etc. Just lots and lots of tasty Malaysian food. Yummy!

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
10/20/2008 10:59 pm

    Quoting Maynilabelle:
    good guess Lee! thanks for sharing. {{HUGZ}}

Hi Maynilabelle,
Thank you. That is my first guess. My second guess is that the Indians pray to their Goddess, summer_lane49, hence the name.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
10/20/2008 11:10 pm

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Hi mrsjoe,
I like autumn too. I have seen pictures of autumn and they are awesome; it is as if the Big Guy has decided to paint the trees in autumn (and spring too, except that in spring he only paints flowers). Yes, both autumn and spring would be my favourite time of the year - warm in the day and chilly in the evening with colour everywhere. Hmm, maybe I should live in four seasons for a while.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
10/21/2008 6:39 am

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Hi flakes,
Indian summer is a period of sunny weather in late autumn and Chinese summer is ....... Maybe they call it Chinese summer in China.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
11/4/2008 10:41 pm

    Quoting  :

Hi Summer Goddess,
I thought you won't be back since Oldboy is there in AP.
I am not yet a haiku poet, more like a haiku student experimenting with all the different styles, modern as well as traditional. But I find difficulty in the abstract style whereby a haiku can have multiple meanings. Mine are more direct but may be interpreted differently by the readers. By the way, did you notice that I have written the ultimate haiku for you-only 3 words.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
11/11/2008 6:59 am

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Hi summer,
1-4-3? Oh, you are referring to alphabets and not syllables ......

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past