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ltw222 75M
5450 posts
4/15/2008 7:37 am
Thunderstorm


Ominous clouds in downcast sky
Lightning flashes, thunderclaps
Reverberate, as rain clouds cry
Falling rain, round us, wraps

Rattling harsh, the window pane
Fighting to get within
The howling wind, amid the rain
Raises one raucous din

Endless raindrops splash and splatter
Drenching the drowning street
Spraying mists of real fine water
On bare and covered feet

Sodden flowers, nodding their heads
Trees, with their wide boughs bent
Soaking all, as the cloudburst spreads
Violent, without relent

Raging torrents, down mountainside
Rumbling, wild and free
Swollen rivers and sea collide
In choppy estuary

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


greeneyes19443 80F

4/15/2008 10:35 am

Nice poem.


Wampanya 72M

4/15/2008 7:25 pm

A poem to 'whet' my appetite for a little rain. We haven't seen any meaningful rain out here in the arid regions of Oz for almost twelve months now.

I like the sentiment behind the poem though and the image that it conjures in my mind


whiterose06 68F
146 posts
4/15/2008 11:25 pm

Great poem. The storm yesterday afternoon in KL was amazing. My laundry room turned into a paddling pool, and the lightning knocked out the auto arms on our security gate.

>shirl327 .......... we are in the middle of the SW monsoon, it started early and it has rained virtually every day for the last 43 weeks with violent storms. As I type this the KL skyline is disappearing in rain clouds. But they have forecast some bad haze to come this year


whiterose06 68F
146 posts
4/15/2008 11:27 pm

Forgot to say that the plants on my balcony are taking swimming lessons and will soon be developing gills


whiterose06 68F
146 posts
4/17/2008 4:53 am

shirl327 , the rain is normal for April on west coast, as its the change of monsoon, we are getting the interseason one from the SW. In May it will start getting hot and dry....... and then the haze! We got the SMART tunnel in KL now, which helps........although causes major traffic jams when it closes!


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
4/18/2008 12:00 am

Thank you all for your comments. Now that you know the rainy season is in full swing, the thunderstorms here are a sight to behold. I once watched a placid mountain stream turn into a raging monster during a thunderstorm and it scared me.
Anyway, if any of you were to see plants with gills happily swimming your way, they belong to whiterose and you can notify her here in SFF.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past