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ltw222 75M
5490 posts
3/25/2008 2:52 am
If I were to leave first


If I were to leave first
Do not be sad
Just remember to cherish
The time we've had
I will forever love you
With all my heart
And even in death
We'll never part
This is not farewell
It's not goodbye
For I will be waiting
So please don't cry
It's time to stop mourning
Time to let go
It's time to dry your tears
Give life a hello
If I were to leave first
Overcome the pain
Live life to the fullest
Till we meet again

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ladyangelula 88F

3/25/2008 6:23 am

A lovely poem...we never know when our time will come...LadyLu...

floatingleaf...


michianaredhead 74F
12642 posts
3/25/2008 9:43 am

Beautiful..thanks for sharing it with us Lee...RED

Some believe in destiny, some believe in fate. I believe that happiness is something we create


whiterose06 68F
146 posts
3/26/2008 4:26 am

Sad, but nice. Did the coming Cheng Beng festival inspire you for this?


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:40 pm

    Quoting  :

Hi kieralyn,
Thanks for your visit and I am glad you like it.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:42 pm

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Hi Daisy,
Thank you.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:45 pm

    Quoting ladyangelula:
    A lovely poem...we never know when our time will come...LadyLu...
Hi LadyLu,
Thank you and how true for tomorrow is a mystery.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:46 pm

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Hi elvis,
I think it's the kind of thing you would have said to her too.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:49 pm

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Hi Barbe,
I am happy that it touched you, It's nice to be appreciated.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:53 pm

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Hi stalzy,
It's always sad to leave someone behind but it's never sad to love.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 6:55 pm

Hi RED,
Thank you for liking it.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 7:05 pm

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Hi classylady,
Beautiful poem. Thanks for answering my poem. I have often done that too. It's like commenting when a post touch us. In fact, I think my poem is the result of reading a beautiful poem called "If Tears Could Build A Stairway".

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 7:06 pm

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Hi IRELAND.
Thank you for visiting again.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 7:10 pm

    Quoting whiterose06:
    Sad, but nice. Did the coming Cheng Beng festival inspire you for this?
Hi whiterose,
Leaving someone behind is always sad. No, my poem is inspired by another poem I read here called "If Tears Could Build A Stairway". You should read it. It's beautiful.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/27/2008 7:15 pm

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Hi shirl,
Long time no see. Thank you and I hope you know a lot of Malaysian men.
(Just being cheeky. Hope you don't mind).

Lee

Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/29/2008 10:54 pm

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Very flattering.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past


ltw222 75M
7793 posts
3/29/2008 11:01 pm

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Hi Philipe,
What you say is true. That's why I am writing this now. A lot of those left behind are lost and do not know what to do.

Lee


Live today as if it is your last
For tomorrow will soon be in the past