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Foto Friday - In the dark Recently I tried a new form of poetry known as cinquain. Well, you know what they say: one should never stop learning. In the dark Listen …….. with little puffs like a departing train, the wind chases away the moon tonight. Softly ……… like wisps of mist lingering in the hills memories of you inundate my mind and touch me affectionately like you did in those days so long ago; I weep. Bygones! Bygones should remain as bygones, but the heavy silence allows them in ……… till dawn. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past |
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7/21/2011 11:00 pm |
A beautiful photo and beautiful poetry to accompany it, Lee. Thank you. "Life isn't fair, but it beats whatever comes in second." -- Gentleben
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7/22/2011 2:07 am |
Very good Lee. Your photograph is quite evocative.
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Enjoyed both picture and poetry. Thanks.
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7/22/2011 5:04 am |
Hi Lee: Beautiful cinquain, very romantic.
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I like it!! A lot!!!
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7/22/2011 8:57 am |
Both are very creative. Spiritwoman ^i^
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A big thank you to all of you. Lee Live today as if it is your last For tomorrow will soon be in the past
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