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Reminders of You From deep within my breath escapes as I whisper your name and in the summer wind I feel your gentle touch upon my face. I feel your kisses on my skin when the rain falls upon me turning my face to the sky so as to feel those kisses on my lips. The sweet scent of your female fragrance overtakes my senses and I reel, this being but a reflex reaction to those loving memories retained. At the mere thought of you my heart skips a beat and then another and my mind quickly wonders if you also might be thinking of me? When night descends I feel your presence upon my loving bed, and therein my heart heals, my soul soars, I am free, and peace is mine. -Richard |
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4/22/2007 9:04 am |
Your prose is lovely, I could feel your words, like it is supposed to be. Thank you for sharing this Richard~so incredibly heartfelt..
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4/22/2007 9:18 am |
Thank you, amazinggrace, for the positive feedback...always good to be validated by our peers... Richard
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4/22/2007 9:47 am |
hhmmm .. I love the word picture "loving bed" .. very nice overall.
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Hi Thoreau, You have expressed in words what I've been feeling in my heart! Thank you for sharing! I will add this to my 'Thought Journal' if you don't mind. Take care!
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4/22/2007 11:02 am |
Hmmmm....someone is going to be wanting an OBE  My meditations never seemed to go in that direction but with MY vivid imagination I'd be in BIG trouble if I was able.... 
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4/22/2007 11:15 am |
Thank you for the feedback, LapKittie and Rocketship. Glad you liked the work... Richard
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4/22/2007 1:11 pm |
OH MY, THIS POEM WOULD CERTAINLY WOO ANY WOMAN LEAVING HER BREATHLESS BRAVO RICHARD SIMPLY AMAZING We are the leaves of one branch, the drops of one sea, the flowers of one garden.
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4/22/2007 1:45 pm |
kismet, thank you for the compliment. Some say we forever do a mating dance, and I suppose poets do that also... Richard
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4/22/2007 6:59 pm |
Thank you for the feedback, Tears. Everything in good time... Richard
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4/23/2007 9:36 am |
Hi kitkat. Thank you for the feedback. I don't know that memories are fantasies. I think that if someone has strong enough memories,some things are bound to be relived. Glad you liked this. Richard
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