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A secret smile The secret smile, is darker than any swirling mist, that hides in shadows of a meanest danger. Beware the lips, that smile be kissed, those softest eyes, the secret smile from a hidden stranger. He will draw you, into the confines of a sensuous lair. Mystery fingers will jangle a serious alarm, such is the want, for this dangerous affair, surrendered warmth, is a confusion of emotion, bereft of calm. No panic button, has an eye in this passion’s room, of deepest red glass and crystal black sky, and moans of love. A silent cry rips the gloom, a sweetest softness, causes the heart to weep in needing cry. The secret smile, is such draw to any dangerous liaison, A need to know the inside of fantasy’s style. Then know lips, which form for love’s occasion, the inside knowledge, which hides within the mists, of a secret smile. |
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12/20/2020 11:54 pm |
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 Abracadabra 
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You certainly know your star and planetary signs. Scorpio is definitely Secret and Neptune describes the nature of the current generation. They were right after the Baby Boomers. Abracadabra
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I read this as the secret smile of a man and the dangers it could possess.... but it also could be seen as those of a woman. I think of the dangers from a man being more physical, and those of the woman being more emotional.... but both secret smiles being dark and sinister. It's an interesting poem to ponder. Be a prism, spreading God's light and love, not a mirror reflecting the world's hatred.
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To smile  or not to smile, now that is the question  I have to think about that too.
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thegoodpoet replies on 12/21/2020 11:33 am: A secret smile, Mrs. Joe is the smile of a couple who know, each what the other is thinking. It is a smile shared only by those who have a deep understanding of the other... Now that, Mrs. Joe is a real get-out! Hmmmm, strange that I did not see that or think of it even. Seeing your response made me think of the secret smiles I have shared...… and seen between others. I guess, from my original comment, you might think I have a dark and sinister side. I assure you that I do, but it stays quiet most of the time. Be a prism, spreading God's light and love, not a mirror reflecting the world's hatred.
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I love it...very good.. got me thinking. An understanding that needs no proof too intimate to need understanding yet appears open and aloof Too unannounce to be rehearsed Too expressive to be fake for the last one or the first And with the eye connection It's a truth of one's love with no alternate selection There is just one simple rule accept feeling it.. to be real not one is fooled... but the fool
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